Wikipedia:Peer review/Miranda Otto/archive2

Miranda Otto edit

I have again expanded and improved this article on the Australian actress. I plan to renominate it for FA status in the near future. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. -- Underneath-it-All 03:52, 13 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 03:46, 4 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The intro needs some tweaking. It should be a better summary of the article. (And don't repeat Australian Film Institute.) The theatre section could use some expansion. How long did those plays run? What city where they in? The "Early life and education" section could use some work--it is vague in places. How exactly did her father influence her? Where did her mother live (at least in relation to Sydney, where her father lived)?

Overall this is a nice article, and a big improvement over its previous incarnations. I thought it was informative. Cheers, Fang Aili ^talk 20:22, 11 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'll look over the article again within the next few days and try to incorporate your suggestions. Thanks! -- Underneath-it-All 03:15, 13 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]