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I've listed this article for peer review because I think I can get it to GA quality. I'd be grateful for any suggestions, and will review some others in the meantime.
Thanks, James26 (talk) 15:00, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
Comments by starship.paint
- Hi James26. If you read the Wikipedia:Good article criteria - the second requirement is that all information is verifiable with no original research. So I would expect everything to be sourced to a reference. For example, the main infobox - please source her birthplace, nicknames, height, weight, reach, stance etc. Everything. There are also several other unsourced Championships and accomplishments. You should work on those first. starship.paint ~ KO 07:11, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for your feedback, Starship.paint. I added sources to the infobox. I only found two unsourced "Championships and accomplishments" (under the UFC section), which I removed. The things I didn't add sources for in the infobox or "Championships and accomplishments" are already sourced elsewhere in the article. -- James26 (talk) 17:32, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
- @James26: - then please use the sources otherwise present in the article, like using multi-reference by <ref name=ufcprofile/> Furthermore, please source the table in Mixed martial arts record. At least one source for each fight, please, you can put them in the Notes column. For example, the fight with Valerie Coolbaugh is unsourced there and also in the main text. starship.paint ~ KO 02:06, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- @Starship.paint -- Done. -- James26 (talk) 04:07, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- @James26: That's great. Unfortunately the references don't provide information on the Location column. I don't think that is very important anyway. Suggest removing that column. starship.paint ~ KO 13:41, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- @Starship.paint -- Done. -- James26 (talk) 04:07, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for your feedback, Starship.paint. I added sources to the infobox. I only found two unsourced "Championships and accomplishments" (under the UFC section), which I removed. The things I didn't add sources for in the infobox or "Championships and accomplishments" are already sourced elsewhere in the article. -- James26 (talk) 17:32, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
- Additionally, the non-free posters are probably not appropriate. I'm not 100% sure on this, but there must be some reason I don't see movie posters (File:"Black Orchid" (1953).jpg) or game posters (File:PokemonXBoxart.jpg) being used anywhere but in their parent articles. For example, the first poster would be appropriate for only the Strikeforce: Tate vs. Rousey article. starship.paint ~ KO 07:15, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
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- Lennox Lewis vs. Mike Tyson has a poster that's also used in Mike Tyson, with a fair-use rationale. I've added a fair-use rationale to the Tate vs. Rousey file, and used it in the same way that was deemed acceptable with the Lewis/Tyson poster. -- James26 (talk) 17:32, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
- Mike Tyson is not a Good or Featured Article, it shouldn't be assumed that that is the right way. I have specific concerns about the Wikipedia:Non-free content#Meeting the no free equivalent criterion - someone could have taken a picture of the fight between Tate and Rousey and released it as free content on the Internet. Thus, there is a possibily of a free equivalent. starship.paint ~ KO 02:00, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- I searched and found no alternative images. -- James26 (talk) 04:07, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- Lennox Lewis vs. Mike Tyson has a poster that's also used in Mike Tyson, with a fair-use rationale. I've added a fair-use rationale to the Tate vs. Rousey file, and used it in the same way that was deemed acceptable with the Lewis/Tyson poster. -- James26 (talk) 17:32, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
- Additionally, MMArising is not mentioned as an acceptable source in Wikipedia:WikiProject Mixed martial arts/sources. Suggest replacing. starship.paint ~ KO 02:08, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- Done. -- James26 (talk) 04:07, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- Please click the external link in the Toolbox on this page. (CTRL-F). Then fix all the coloured links for the references. There is at least one dead linked reference. You may use archive.org or obtaining another source. starship.paint ~ KO 13:41, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- There's also no need for a Sponsors section by itself. Insert the info into Mixed martial arts career, where-ever it fits in the time-line. starship.paint ~ KO 13:41, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- @Starship.paint -- I combined a couple sections toward the end and removed a double ref. As for the locations, I couldn't seem to remove the column. Guess it'll have to stay. Some of the refs in the main body verifiy where the events took place; one can also click to the articles about those events, which provide more refs. As you said, this probably isn't a big concern for a reader. Anyway, I think I'll give it a rest for now. I really appreciate all of your help with this review. Thanks. -- James26 (talk) 21:15, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
- Okay. You're welcome! Additionally, could you check out my Wikipedia:Peer review/Wrestle Kingdom 9/archive1? starship.paint ~ KO 00:58, 16 July 2015 (UTC)
- @Starship.paint -- I combined a couple sections toward the end and removed a double ref. As for the locations, I couldn't seem to remove the column. Guess it'll have to stay. Some of the refs in the main body verifiy where the events took place; one can also click to the articles about those events, which provide more refs. As you said, this probably isn't a big concern for a reader. Anyway, I think I'll give it a rest for now. I really appreciate all of your help with this review. Thanks. -- James26 (talk) 21:15, 15 July 2015 (UTC)