Wikipedia:Peer review/Merv Griffin/archive1

Merv Griffin edit

I believe this article merits consideration as a feature article but I feel it should undergo a peer review first. Comments about any and all parts of the article are most welcome. Verne Equinox 04:03, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Article needs specific citations, a la WP:CITE. The article could also benefit from a more expanded lead-in, per WP:LEAD. In general, the article flows fairly well, but I think it would greatly benefit from expanded content in most sections and cutting or drastically reducing the trivia section. --Vengeful Cynic 20:08, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]