Wikipedia:Peer review/Mendy Rudolph/archive1

Mendy Rudolph edit

I've cleanup this biography of Mendy Rudolph and am looking for additional feedback to further improve the article. This article is well-cited and I believe it is GAC-ready. RyguyMN 05:17, 6 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Automated Peer Review edit

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  Done I believe the lead provides a fair summary of the article. RyguyMN 07:11, 19 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
  Not done No free image exists of the subject. RyguyMN 05:26, 17 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?]
  Done RyguyMN 05:25, 17 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 17:07, 16 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]