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Martin Brodeur edit

This article still needs some work and I'd like some other people's perspectives on it. I suppose it still needs more referencing and maybe a shorter lead. Any help would be appreciated. Sportskido8 23:03, 13 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

"NHL career" section could do with generally more inline citations. Also the "Awards summary" section could form part of a "Legacy" main section - in this section you could deal with critical reception towards his career with opinions for and against. I would convert the "Awards summary" info into prose also. LuciferMorgan 02:26, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'll see what I can do. Sportskido8 19:08, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 23:20, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]