Wikipedia:Peer review/Mark Udall/archive1

Mark Udall edit

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I eventually want to nominate it for good article status, but in the meantime, I'd like suggestion on how to make it better.

Thanks, Grammarxxx (What'd I do this time?) 09:53, 27 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]