Wikipedia:Peer review/Luxurious/archive1

Luxurious

I feel the article is very well written and want to take it to A Class. So, i request everyone to kindly give some suggestion for the improvement of the article. User:Luxurious.gaurav

The information about the music needs to be expanded badly. 17Drew 17:28, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Done Luxurious.gaurav 13:15, 28 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.^[?]

Done Luxurious.gaurav 13:15, 28 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.^[?]

Done Luxurious.gaurav 13:15, 28 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]^[?]

Done Luxurious.gaurav 13:15, 28 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.^[?]

Done Luxurious.gaurav 13:15, 28 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 11:49, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]