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List of mayors of Paducah, Kentucky edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because its the main List article I've worked on, and I would like to know what thoughts more experienced list editors have on improving it as a whole for future list ventures.

Thanks, Hooper (talk) 15:43, 28 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dtbohrer

I've worked on a mayoral list for Erie, Pennsylvania so I might be able help. Some things I noticed to could improve the article were:

Adding a "Notes" column to the table for any miscellaneous info, such as:
- Did any of the mayors do anything particularly famous (or infamous)?
- Did any of them die in office or resign from office?
Standardizing the polictical party shading of the table using {{Party shading}}.
When did the change from 2 year terms to 4 happen?
Possibly working the subject of the article into the first sentence and bolding it per WP:BOLDTITLE.
Were there any leaders of Paducah before it became a city?

Also, try looking at other city's mayoral lists to give you additional ideas of what to do for this list. If you would like additional comments, don't hesitate to ask. --D.B.^{talk•contribs} 04:33, 8 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]