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List of countries by GDP (nominal) per capita edit

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I've listed this article for peer review, because I would like to know how to impore it towards featured list status.

Thanks, Meaty♠Weenies (talk) 19:37, 1 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback from Killervogel5 edit

First thing I can see that needs to be addressed is that there are no inline citations or references for anything in the lead section of the list.
Don't have links in the bold section of the lead. Link them at their next occurrence.
If you can get updated information (2007) from the World Bank, it would help immensely. Right now, the data can't be considered viable across multiple years in that way, especially considering that in the lead, it says "results can vary greatly from one year to another based on fluctuations in the exchange rates of the country's currency."
"The Bahamas" and "The Gambia" should be sorted under B and G, respectively, rather than T.
The article does not include three individual lists. It is a single list that is bringing together multiple groups of data. The lead should likely reflect that.
There are some commas missing in the lead; i.e., P2 (Therefore, these figures should be used with caution, etc.)

Hopefully that's some stuff to get you started. KV5 • Squawk box • Fight on! 12:57, 4 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]