Wikipedia:Peer review/List of York City F.C. players/archive1
List of York City F.C. players edit
I've just done some more work on this list, and I'm wandering what else should be done to help get it to FL status. However, I can only use league appearances for the players on the list, as I cannot get all competitions data from the period 1990-1996. Thanks, Mattythewhite 23:25, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
- Two minor points:
- the last two sentences in the lead should be rewritten, as starting a sentence with "although" in that manner is incorrect. Maybe try "Appearances in non-league football from 2004 to the present are included, however, as a source is available for this."
Done Rewritten. Mattythewhite 15:11, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
- You have both "An asterisk (*) next to a name denotes that the player had more than one spell at the club." and "An asterisk (*) next to a name denotes that the players stats account for the league." - which is correct?
- Done I've removed the latter - this should have been removed before, as it applied to the old format I used. Mattythewhite 15:09, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
Can't see any problems other than that. allfootballers.com will have the missing cup data but you have to pay to subscribe - personally I think the list is OK without the cup data...... ChrisTheDude 15:04, 15 October 2007 (UTC)