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List of St. Louis Rams first-round draft picks edit
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I would like to know what needs to be done in order to make it a featured list. I used List of Green Bay Packers first-round draft picks as a template for this list. Thanks for your input. --Pinkkeith (talk) 14:08, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Avoid links in the bold part of the lead per WP:LEAD#Bold title.
- Place (NFL) after "National football league" so when you use the abbreviation, we all know exactly what you're talking about.
- Opening sentences in the lead read very choppily.
- Any reason why always is in italics?
- A key for positions would be useful for people unfamiliar with US football positions.
- Enshrined? Admitted to would be better.
- WP:COLOUR would suggest you don't use colour only as a way of identifying a particular trait, so use an asterisk, dagger etc for these as well.
- Jack Wilson is a dab link. Check all others.
- Any reason why you have "Early Era" at all?
- And "Modern Era"? Are these official designations within NFL or are they terms you've used?
- Check periods in footnotes.
That's a start. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:23, 26 April 2008 (UTC)