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I've listed this article for peer review, as you can see. Gary King (talk) 04:28, 8 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

~~"Don Shula, who coached the Dolphins for 36 straight seasons" "straight"-->consecutive.~~
"Shula has also been named the United Press International (UPI) NFL Coach of the Year twice while a coach for the Dolphins."-->He was named the United Press International (UPI) NFL Coach of the Year twice during his tenure with the Dolphins.
~~"Sparano is the head coach of the Dolphins since 2008." "is"-->has been.~~
~~I think Image:Dolphin Stadium.jpg needs a better source.~~ Dabomb87 (talk) 22:52, 8 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All done Gary King (talk) 23:58, 8 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]