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I've listed this article for peer review because it wants to be peer reviewed. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 23:56, 7 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) Wry statements notwithstanding, here are my comments:

~~"Three different coaches have won Super Bowls with the team" Different is understood in this context.~~
~~You need to put information about the head coaches' playoff winning percentage.~~
~~Ref 6 is not formatted like the rest of the Pro Football Reference citations.~~
~~Make all the citation dates look the same; right now, there are some in ISO format and some in American format.~~ Dabomb87 (talk) 02:35, 8 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All done Gary King (talk) 02:43, 8 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]