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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to receive feedback on how to improve it. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 21:08, 5 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - the list itself checks out fine, however, the prose is okay, it just needs to flow better like in other lists. See List of Tennessee Titans head coaches and List of New Orleans Saints head coaches.--S R X 21:19, 5 December 2008 (UTC)