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List of Arkansas Razorbacks in the NFL Draft

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I've listed this article for peer review because I hope it is close to being a Featured List. This is the second third list of its kind, the first second being List of East Carolina Pirates in the NFL Draft which was nominated and promoted to WP:FL. However, this list is bigger than the first one and would like comments on how to improve the article to meet the criteria of WP:FL.

Thanks, Reorion (talk) 05:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments by JKBrooks85

Very good work all around. It's clean, well-cited, and easily understandable. The dead link checker didn't turn up anything. I modified the lede slightly for clarity purposes, so feel free to check that to make sure that I didn't change anything too important too badly. There's only two things that I'd suggest changing:

• Cincinnati is misspelled throughout the article.
  •  Done - Reorion (talk) 22:22, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
• Consider changing "NFL Champions" to "NFL champion," since we're talking about the player rather than a team. The existing title wouldn't work for players who have earned titles with more than one team.
  •  Done - Reorion (talk) 22:22, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

But those are minor things, and though I'm sure someone will find something to disagree with during FLC, I think it's good to go once those fixes are made. JKBrooks85 (talk) 21:48, 14 July 2008 (UTC)