Wikipedia:Peer review/Lindsay Lohan/archive2

Lindsay Lohan edit

If no one minds too much, I've archived the old peer review and am resubmitting. Massive work has been done to this article, and I'd like more input before I go to FAC. Radio Kirk talk to me 01:53, 25 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I still find the split between Bio and In the media spotlight strange. Most of her career (which is covered in the Bio section) happend "In the media spotlight" and things like how her name is pronounced and her heritage don't really relate to the media attetion. I'd merge these sections into a large Biography section and then split it into subsections, similar to how it is handled in similar articles such as Kelly Clarkson and Britney Spears. --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 14:12, 25 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Radio Kirk talk to me 18:53, 25 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]