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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this article to GA-status and I want to the article to be spotchecked before I nominate it for GAN.
Thanks, 141Pr {contribs} 19:40, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720 edit
Comments after a quick skim:
- There are numerous places that need a citation. There should be a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum, that verifies the information that proceeds it.
- Some sections might be too long. Typically, I think a section should be two to four paragraphs before it is broken up into subheadings. This is not a rule or expectation, but does help the reader find and process the information. However, if there is no natural place to split up the section, then don't worry about it.