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Juju (Siouxsie and the Banshees album) edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to find out which parts of it may need improving so I can improve the article.

Thanks, Lachlan Foley 08:24, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • After the slightly electronic bent of their previous album, 1980's Kaleidoscope, the Banshees returned to a guitar-based sound for Juju, due to the presence of now-official guitarist John McGeoch. The album also prominently featured the intricate percussion work of band member Budgie. This is all arguably opinion, one's interpretation and view on the subject. These statements should be cited, and attributed to who holds these opinions - be it critics, the musicians themselves, or otherwise.
  • Is there any information available on the writing process, the recording process, and also the lyrical themes?
  • I would amalgamate the sections "Critical reception" and "Legacy". The album's "Goth influence and association" is a part of its "Legacy", so perhaps it would be best to amalgamate all three.
  • Juju, alongside Bauhaus' In the Flat Field (1980) and The Cure's early work (most notably 1982's Pornography), is considered one of the first and most influential gothic rock albums. Considered by whom?

These are my observations. Hope this helps. LuciferMorgan (talk) 14:00, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]