Wikipedia:Peer review/Jalal al-Din Muhammad Rumi/archive1

Jalal ad-Din Muhammad Rumi edit

I've worked on this article, and would like to further improve it to FA status. I've run out of ideas for now, so suggestions/help would be highly appreciated. deeptrivia (talk) 18:14, 4 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

My comments

Citations - a lot more notes are necessary - especially on quotes of poetry, sayings, etc.
Lead - its small - should summarize his life, philosophy and influence.
Organization - its a very basic organization right now. I wonder if its possible to do more sophisticated - for example, life would be subdivided into early-pivotal-later-climactic-demise sorta. Influence of background philosophies/culture/ideas on and from Rumi should be told in the sections of his life, teachings, works, as one stream and not separate.
I usually don't like to see red links in an FA - please see if you can create articles on those topics.
A sense of comprehensive-ness is usually obtained if the article's size is around 32-35kb. The amount of text is reliant on the sources available to you, but there should be some guarantee of comprehensiveness. Rama's Arrow 19:35, 4 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Image:Shams ud-Din Tabriz 1502-1504 BNF Paris.jpg is without copyright info - also, FU images must have an FU rationale to be in an FA. Rama's Arrow 19:43, 4 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I'm working on some of these points. Any non-commercial use of the images I uploaded is fair according to the source. I'll contact the guy who uploaded Image:Shams ud-Din Tabriz 1502-1504 BNF Paris.jpg for source. deeptrivia (talk) 03:51, 6 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Stomp some of those red links. --maru (talk) contribs 23:29, 19 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]