Wikipedia:Peer review/InuYasha/archive1

InuYasha

I'd like to see this a featured article. If I could have some pointers on its shortcomings; that'd be great. I think all the information is there, and it just needs to be assembled in the most user-friendly way. -Litefantastic 23:44, 22 April 2006 (UTC) Sure:[reply]

No references.
Various images used with no/incorrect licencing information.
All kinds of problems with the factual accuracy of the article: "Inuyasha is a popular shōnen manga and anime series... Inuyasha is a shōjo action adventure romantic comedy"... .... (hint, first sentence was right).
No meaningful critical commentary, western general-purpose-anime sites don't count.
Far too much of the article is silly meaningless stuff like the "Title dispute" section, that's maybe relevant to some really anal western fans, but not an encyclopedia article. 'Popularity' refers only to US tv stations.
Nothing really about the style of the manga, or the anime, or about the process of creation, Takahashi, Sunrise, or any of its staff.

So, lots of work to be getting on with, if you're up for it. --zippedmartin 09:58, 23 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]