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International Religious Freedom Act of 1998 edit

This is obviously a law-related articles. I would like to have your valuable suggestions on the matter, so that this article may (hopefully) be promoted to FA or GA status. Regards, --Nearly Headless Nick 13:28, 23 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.
  • Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18&nbsp;mm.
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.
  • It can be improved by reducing links to solitary years. A monobook tool allows this to be done with one click on a 'dates' tab in edit mode. You can then accept or reject the changes offered and/or do more editing before pressing 'Save'. Simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. Hope that helps. bobblewik 19:18, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Alternatively, WP:AWB also helps. --Nearly Headless Nick 10:24, 29 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You might want to consider making section 2 and sections 4 through 6 subsections of "Scope and substance of the act," or some other organizational scheme. The titles of sections 4, 5, and 6 are kind of wordy given the article's title: perhaps "State Department office," "Bipartisan commission," and "Special advisor" would do? What have been the effects of this act in Sino-American relations or more broadly?--Monocrat 12:49, 1 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Quickies:

  • "Scope and substance of the Act" is extremely confusing. It needs to be broken down into smaller paragraphs.
  • Several single-paragraph sections.
  • instead of "see also" at the end of "History", thearticle should be linked in its occurence within the first line of that same section.

Circeus 02:41, 11 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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