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I Need You (LeAnn Rimes song) edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get some input on how to make this article better. Please post any comments you can to help.

Thanks, Swifty*^talk 00:50, 7 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Lead says she's a " country pop artist" but the infobox says it's a "Christian" genre release. Needs resolving.
"it was released" is repeated three times in the first para of the lead. Boring.
"twenty-five weeks" -> 25 weeks.
Background para opening sentence is copy-and-paste of the lead. Boring.
In fact, the whole lead opening para is copied verbatim into the Background section. Not the best way ahead.
"LeAnn Rimes donated her ..." no need to repeat her first name.
"therapeutic rehabilitation wing - the " en-dash per WP:DASH.
" this song wasn’t available" avoid contractions.
Video section could use a copyedit and a few links.
Track listing section also needs WP:DASH treatment.
As does "Charts (2000-2001)".
Several entries in the Chart positions section are unreferenced.
DON'T SHOUT in the ref titles.
For non-English refs, use the {{lang}} template.
Make sure all suitable online links have access dates.
Make sure refs meet WP:DASH and have all available info like publisher, access date, publication date, author name etc.

The Rambling Man (talk) 19:36, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]