Wikipedia:Peer review/Hurricane Camille/archive1

Hurricane Camille edit

This has just been selected as the TCCOFT, and I thought the best thing to do was put it up for Peer review right away. The impact section is in need the most, and the main reason it is the TCCOFT. Icelandic Hurricane #12 23:45, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'd also like to have a death chart thing. But I'm not the best at making them (you can see User:Icelandic Hurricane/Sandbox if you don' believe me). Icelandic Hurricane #12 00:54, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure where I can do it, but the damage total needs to be updated to 2005 USD. Can someone do it for me? Icelandic Hurricane #12 11:49, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, years without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January 2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note WP:BTW and WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006, should be come February 28, 2006.

Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.

Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{Cite web}} and {{Cite book}} may be useful here.

Done, I think. Is there more to it then what is now there? TimL 03:54, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.

As is done in WP:FOOTNOTE, for footnotes, the footnote should be located right after the punctuation mark, such that there is no space inbetween. For example, change blah blah [2]. to blah blah.[2]

Done. TimL 03:54, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:MOSNUM, at Units of measurement, numbers with SI units of measure should have conversions in US customary units and vice versa. These conversions should keep to similar values of precision. For example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth". Note that the converted unit of measure uses a standard abbreviation, while the source unit is spelled out in the text.

Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a no-break space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.

There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. For example, Impact is/are a bit short.

Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.

This article can use copyediting to ensure that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. For example,
- Camille crossed the southeastern tip of Louisiana, then hit near Bay St. Louis, Mississippi on the night of August 17. the word "and" is missing after the comma.
- and perhaps other copyediting fixes for grammar/spelling are needed.

I just did a good bit of copyediting on the intro and storm history section. TimL 03:54, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, AndyZ 21:48, 19 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Also, the references need the cite web format, but I really stink at that job. I need someone else to do it. Icelandic Hurricane #12_(talk) 21:31, 22 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

As above, this is now done. TimL 03:54, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]