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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this to GA.
Thanks, Leave Message ,Yellow Evan home , User:Yellow Evan/Sandbox 14:48, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
- As a significant contributor to this article, I can say this still needs quite a bit of work. For example, the discussions need to be incorporated into the met. history. –Juliancolton | Talk 14:50, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: Since the article is undergoing a major revamping, I'll just make a few brief comments.
- What you have reads well in most places.
- You might want to express pressures in inches of mercury as well as millibars throughout the article.
- I see typos here and there in the article and other proofing mistakes such as "Alma had serve impact in Mexico".
- Some of the en dashes such as the one in "mid–level trough" should be hyphens.
- WP:MOSNUM suggests that generally the main units of measurement should be spelled out and the secondary units abbreviated. Thus 19.09 in (485 mm) should be 19.09 inches (485 mm). I like using the {{convert}} template because it spells, abbreviates, and calculates automatically.
- Abbreviations like GFDL should in most cases be spelled out and possibly linked on first use. GFDL often means the Gnu Free Documentation License but not here.
- Why is the damage from the hurricane unknown?
I hope this helps. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth (talk) 22:51, 17 June 2009 (UTC)