Wikipedia:Peer review/History of the automobile/archive1
History of the automobile edit
This article was a COTW nominee and an editor took the initiative to expand the article, thus disqualifying it from COTW. I believe this could be a featured article, therefore I'm nominating it for Peer Review. —ℬastique▼talk 16:42, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC)
- This is great work, but it still needs some changes to be a FA candidate. It needs references and a longer lead, the lead should also lose the list and table. In terms of content the main problem is that it focuses too much on the cars themselves. There is very little on the automobile's effect on society. - SimonP 15:27, Jun 18, 2005 (UTC)
- See Wikipedia:Lead for what lead should be: expand and move the list and table template somwhere into mainbody. Expand short sections and rewrite so they have fewer bullets ('Vintage era' and 'Pre-War era' are definetly stub-sections, although as they have subarticle try expanding from it). References are a must. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 20:48, 19 Jun 2005 (UTC)
I have some patient work on the Harry J Lawson my Great Great Grandfather who founded the Daimlar Motor Company the first Britsh Production Motor Car. But how to enter into a timeline.. http://watchinmewatchinu.blogspot.com/2003_05_18_watchinmewatchinu_archive.html