Wikipedia:Peer review/Henri Toivonen/archive1

I have worked on this article for quite some time now. Considering the amount of information available, I feel it is comprehensive and well-referenced. The biggest fault of it is probably the fact that it is completely written by a non-native English speaker. I have tried to achieve better prose and more neutral wording, but am unable to improve it further. I originally started working on the article with cleanup and referencing as the aim, but now I would like to see it become the first GA/FA related to rallying and the World Rally Championship. Any suggestions are welcome. Thanks, Prolog 16:35, 7 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]