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Hello, after about 8-year editing on Vietnamese wikipedia, I've created and wrote this article about a well-known Vietnamese progressive metal band. I've listed this article for peer review because I need experienced editors to help me to identify the weak points of the article, which will give me basis to fix them as good as I can. I hope that after this peer-reviews, this article will achieve the best quality that a band-themed article should have.

Thanks, Mintu Martin (talk) 07:46, 6 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720 edit

Comments after a quick skim:

I suggest bringing this to WP:GOCE to help with grammar and phrasing
There should be a citation at the end of each paragraph, minimum (except the lede).
"See Members" in the infobox: do not link to another part of the article, per MOS:CIRCULAR
The lede should include information about their musical style.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 00:34, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]