Freeway Complex Fire edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for WP:GA status.
Thanks, Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 23:00, 5 September 2016 (UTC)
A couple of comments:
- "The preliminary cause of the Freeway Fire was thought to be": needs to be rephrased; this was a preliminary estimate or guess, not a preliminary cause.
- The last sentence is uncited.
- I think the lead could be expanded a little with one or two more facts from the article.
The sources seem sound, and the image appears to be correctly licensed. I think this would pass GA with the minor points above fixed. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:50, 30 October 2016 (UTC)