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After working on the article in my sandbox space for almost a month, I've moved all the work to the main article space. I'm looking to take it to Good-Article standard (and possibly further), so any advice on how to improve it would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks, PotentPotables (talk) 23:26, 4 November 2019 (UTC)