Wikipedia:Peer review/Fawlty Towers/archive1

Fawlty Towers edit

It's an important show in the history of British comedy, and it would be nice to get it featured, but I'd first like to see what could be improved. smurrayinchester^{(User), (Talk)} 13:22, 13 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Many problems need to be tackled before this article becomes featured:

No spoiler warning.

Done.

Fawlty Towers influence should be changed to influence from Fawlty Towers, since it discusses influence from the broadcast, not to it.

Done.

No references.

No inline citations.

I've added some, but a lot seem to be the same couple of sources (IMDb and BBC). Is this OK?

It's ok, as long as the things that need to be referenced are referenced.

The lead should contain general information about the article's topic, and the plot should be given its own section and heavily expanded and worked on in order to allow readers with no knowledge of the subject to easily understand what is going on.

Many weak, 1-sentence paragraphs clutter the article.

AndyZ 20:32, 13 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a proper look tomorrow, but I notice immediately that several of the links to episodes lead to articles unrelated; the film 'Touch of Class' and the film 'The Anniversary' etc - should be fixed. --Loopy ^e 05:07, 20 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]