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I've listed this article for peer review because I have followed the advice of the last reviewer, added new information and sources, and I'm looking to see what else needs to be done to make it eligible for publishing.

Thanks, EuphoriaMarketing (talk) 14:24, 8 May 2017 (UTC)EuphoriaMarketing[reply]

My main concern with this is each yearly event simply lists the acts, but contains hardly any information. Plus, each section has acts that have not been listed, so it's not fully comprehensive. I'd suggest doing away with the lists completely and turning into prose, so each section does not look so bare. Then perhaps discuss the acts that appeared in more detail if possible. Aiken D 12:55, 29 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]