Wikipedia:Peer review/Eugenio Espejo/archive1

Eugenio Espejo edit

This article might need to be checked for grammar mistakes (I'm not a native English speaker). References (especifically notes) seem to be disorganized. Perhaps the article can be shortened a bit. Let me know what do you think about it. Dalobuca 05:20, 9 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

There are a number of grammatical issues that need attention. It might be easiest if I simply fixed the smaller ones rather than produced a list of small changes needed and brought larger issues back here. Are you happy with that? Ben MacDui (Talk) 17:16, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]