Wikipedia:Peer review/Eritrea/archive1

I want to have this page nominated for a feature article. It is a very comprehensive article. It seems to be well written but I would like to see what others think first. Merhawie 23:40, 5 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]


  • Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{Cite web}} and {{Cite book}} may be useful here.
  • I'm pretty confident that paper sources can be found for this article.
 
  • Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
  • This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
  • There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. For example, Culture is/are a bit short.
  • Merge languages into Demographics
    • In response to Andy's point about dates: This task is easier with the aid of a 'dates' tab in edit mode. Simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. You will also get a 'units' tab. Hope that helps. bobblewik 19:02, 7 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]