Wikipedia:Peer review/Dromornithidae/archive1

Dromornithidae edit

One of my longer articles, a lot of info already in place. I'm not sure wether all the formatting and wording is correct. Could this be a featured article? Mstroeck 12:30, 24 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Great job!
It's nice to wiki family, genus, species, etc. the first time used
Anything interesting in the etymology of the word?
Why are there so many different genera? What differentiates them/why are some split into species?
Not everyone knows how large a cassowary is. Perhaps a more concrete estimation of size?
Explain the Australian megafauna the first time you introduce it
There are a lot of red links! InvictaHOG 00:45, 26 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback, InvictaHOG! I had a go at all your points except for the red links (that's going to be a lot of work) and the question about taxonomy (frankly, I don't know...). I'll try to find that out and start writing the missing articles or at least create some useful stubs. Mstroeck 19:20, 26 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Just for the record, I have begun to create articles for the red links. Cuddie Springs is already online and almost done, just needs referencing. I have rudimentary articles for almost all the others as well, but haven't put them online yet. However, I'll be on vacation for the nex 4 days, so I probably won't be able to answer to any comments. Mstroeck 13:55, 27 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]