Wikipedia:Peer review/Drew Struzan/archive1

Drew Struzan edit

I've worked hard on this article since I created some time back. Like to hear what others think and how to improve it i n keeping in line with the Wikipedia standards. Thanks--71.136.187.127 00:34, 21 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

While it's an excellent article, some people may find the style overly familiar and judgmental at times. Statements such as "they beat a steady pathway to his door" and "finding a shared soul and recognizing her complimentary qualities to his own awkward introvertedness" appear to be non-neutral opinions. &c. Thanks. :) — RJH 15:28, 23 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]