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I've listed this article for peer review because so many content has been added since it was reviewed that I want to make sure that the prose quality and sources are good.

Thanks, Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:39, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

" After meeting up with..." not keen on the "up" here, I understand it's typical American English but I think it's entirely redundant.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Spears recorded the singer recorded " eh?
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Additional songwriting was done by " yuck on the "was done by", clumsy phrase.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The teen-pop ballad, speaks of a " no need for the comma.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"a similar sound to " -> "a sound similar to"
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"said to be miffed at " miffed -> annoyed. Or put "miffed" in quotes.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Oops!...I Did It Again" is missing a space after the ellipsis.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Don't think you need to link Sweden and Switzerland, very common geographical terms...
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"writing was done by his " same again.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Is it "Robert Lange", "Lange" or "Mutt Lange"? All are correct but I suggest you stick with one in the prose.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"seconds.[8][3]" put refs in order.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"that the "Eagles-esque chorus" worth linking Eagles here I think.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Barnes and Noble" should really be "Barnes & Noble".
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"on the last week " surely "in" the last week?
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"March 2, 2001.[30][19] " put refs in order.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"time, Justin Timberlake[26][27]." put refs after the full stop.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Spears performing "Don't Let Me Be the Last to Know" on 2011's Femme Fatale Tour." no full stop required.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"she is seen on a tree where " you really don't need to link tree here.
Lol sorry! Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"and a guy from " a little colloquial.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"broadcasting done by American " again, "done" is clumsy.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Weekly charts table is out of order to start with (the Belgian charts switch when you sort by chart name).
They switch because one is Ultratop 40 and the other is Ultratop 50. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:46, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Year-end and Certifications tables really don't need to be sortable with a single entry in each.
Ref 6 has a spaced hyphen in the title, should be an en-dash per WP:DASH.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:46, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Be consistent with the spacing after the ... in reference titles featuring Oops!... I did it again!
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Refs 18, 20, 25, 34, 35 need an en-dash.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:46, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 10:02, 11 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry it took me so long. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]