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Death's Game

I've listed this article for peer review because I need to know what part of the page needs improvement and if it is ready to nominate as a Good Article candidate. 98𝚃𝙸𝙶𝙴𝚁𝙸𝚄𝚂 • [𝚃𝙰𝙻𝙺] 03:08, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

Hi, some feedback:

• Possibly could use a bit more detail in the synopsis. Info about setting in particular; is it set in modern South Korea?

Reply: I can't find a reliable source be it in English or Korean about the particular setting of the series but I expanded the synopsis.

• Per MOS:FOREIGNQUOTE, translated quotes should include original Korean-language text somewhere

Reply: I put the original Korean-language text on the citation and underlined it. I also add more reviews.

• Forgot where in the MOS this is, but I'm spotting some punctuation just before closing quotes, and these appear to be translated quotes. Generally punct should be expected to be before closing quotes only if the punct matches what the original quote had; otherwise I think it's safe to default to doing punct after the quote mark.

Reply:  Done

• Currencies are currently wikilinked multiple times; likely unnecessary per MOS:OVERLINK I think.

Reply:  Done

• Preference thing, but I think in the episode list table maybe consider doing a line break in between the english title, korean title, and transliterated title. I'd also consider swapping the order of the transliterated and korean title, and omitting the "Korean" and "Transliteration" labels after the first, but I think debatable.

Reply: Per Template:Episode list it can't be done.

Otherwise I think has a solid shot of getting GA! 104.232.119.107 (talk) 12:45, 4 May 2024 (UTC)

Edit: Thanks for giving some feedbacks. All done. 98𝚃𝙸𝙶𝙴𝚁𝙸𝚄𝚂 • [𝚃𝙰𝙻𝙺] 12:47, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

One note; to my understanding synopses do not need to be sourced per MOS:PLOTSOURCE. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 20:39, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

There are still some grammar errors in the article, but the content and style otherwise seems good to me. I can go through and do a quick revision; otherwise I think this is ready for a GA nom. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 19:54, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Done and thanks for revising some contents. 98𝚃𝙸𝙶𝙴𝚁𝙸𝚄𝚂 • [𝚃𝙰𝙻𝙺] 09:00, 13 May 2024 (UTC)