DJ Hero edit
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because need to gain input in comparison to other Guitar Hero articles as this is a slightly different beast.
Thanks, MASEM (t) 04:37, 27 December 2009 (UTC)
Okay, here's my input:
- Infobox needs ratings from OFLC, BBFC and PEGI, with citations. You should try and fill out as many fields in the Infobox as possible.
- Lead section does not broadly summarize the entire article. Need to mention critical response and commercial success here.
- Gameplay section is good.
- File:DJ Hero spread out.jpg should probably go somewhere else. You probably might need to open a "Promotion" sub-section under Development and move the image there.
- The Development section might need some better organization.
- There are six references after the following sentence in the Soundtrack section: "The individual songs themselves have been pulled from a large number of music genres, including pop, grunge, soul, R&B, techno, hip hop, and house." Realistically, there should only be about three there at the absolute most.
- The Reviews sub-section is going to need a makeover because it's not broad enough in its coverage. I don't think I need to elaborate as it's fairly obvious what needs to happen with the Reception section.
- The Pre-release sub-section is pretty small and way too choppy. Consider expanding it, or merging it somewhere else.
- References 31 and 50 need proper formatting. Reference 38 is from YouTube, and should probably be removed as there are already two other citations before it.