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I've listed this article for peer review because I've basically rewritten it. The original was an example farm and mess of original research. I haven't gotten much feedback on it, and I'd like to see if people like the direction that I've taken the article. Also, I have concerns that the article is USA-centric. I've tried to rewrite sections that were overtly USA-centric, but I suspect it needs more work. In particular, I'm worried about the Overview section, which might be perceived as tracing a history only through American cinema. Finally, I'd also like feedback on whether the article is clear, concise, and stays on-topic. I've tried to limit the amount of academic terms, jargon, and polysyllabic verbiage, but some did manage to sneak in, near the end of the article.
Thanks, NinjaRobotPirate (talk) 16:30, 20 May 2013 (UTC)