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I've listed this article for peer review because I created it and want feedback on how it can be improved.

Thanks, RCSprinter123 (talk) 11:10, 27 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article has now been improved and copyedited for you by two experienced editors. To see the kind of changes that were made, please compare the diffs in the page history. Guidelines for school articles can be found at WP:WPSCH/AG. --Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 18:46, 28 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by MikeLynch:

Not sure why this was listed here, article still has some way to go.
References should be given to the History and Daily life sections.
Article needs general expansion.
Some images of the place could be added.

These are my comments; I suppose other editors are free to add theirs! Regards, Yes Michael? •^Talk 16:28, 4 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I concur with the above. It is clearly stated on the WP:PR page that peer review is "intended for high-quality articles that have already undergone extensive work." At present this article has only 250 words, spread over six very sketchy sections. It will not be ready for a peer review until a great deal more work has been done. I advise that you look at "school" articles that have been listed as Good Articles, here, to understand what kind of further development is necesary. British schools listed here include Stonyhurst College, Malvern College and Royal Grammar School, Guildford. These are much older schools, with much longer histories; I'm not suggesting this article can mirror those, but thry certainly provide plenty of ideas for its expansion. Brianboulton (talk) 00:03, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]