Carly Foulkes edit
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because a lot of new content has been added. Maybe it will go to GAC in the future.
Thanks, TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:15, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
- Comments by Bradley0110
- No source has been provided for her birthdate.
- The only source I see is IMDb.com. The date was added by an IP and the original creation by Gerardw (talk · contribs) included the year.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:59, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
- "Then, after high school, she moved to New York model for agents." "to model for agents"?
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:44, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
- "She began modeling in the Toronto area at age 13. Then, after high school, she moved to New York model for agents. Subsequently, she found modelling work in Singapore and Europe. After returning to New York to model, she began to pursue acting." What is the source for all of this? None of the three sources in this paragraph mention Singapore and Europe. The Ask Stacy Q&A says "She reportedly hopes to break into acting" which isn't the same thing as "she began to pursue acting".
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:51, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
- "It is speculated that if the AT&T-T-Mobile merger gets approved that the T-Mobile advertising budget will be cut." You should probably mention how this relates to Foulkes (e.g. "BNET writer Jim Edwards speculated that AT&T-T-Mobile merger is approved, the T-Mobile advertising budget will be cut, possible meaning the end of Foulkes' appearances in the commercials.")
- Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:47, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
Bradley0110 (talk) 17:39, 1 August 2011 (UTC)