Wikipedia:Peer review/Breakfast cereal/archive1

Breakfast cereal edit

I randomly stumbed upon this article, and since breakfast cereal plays such an essential part in my life (and the lives of countless others), I figured it'd be cool to bring this up to FAC quality. I already added a history section; any other suggestions? I'm at a loss of what to do next. The PNM 04:12, 23 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Consider renaming to "American cold breakfast cereal". Very U.S. POV, no mention of muesli, for example. Exclusion of hot breakfast cereals seems odd. Rmhermen 16:49, August 23, 2005 (UTC)

Strikes me that this would make a good WP:COTW or WP:AID. -- ALoan (Talk) 11:23, 24 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Nitpicking but the text under the image reads a bit goofily... I tend to prefer a quotation out of the text, ie, Breakfast cereals have their root in the temperance movement in the United States in the last quarter of the nineteenth century. Bit of POV in there too. --PopUpPirate 23:09, August 30, 2005 (UTC)

I added the for template WikiProject Countering systemic bias Seano1 00:37, 3 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I would expect a section about the types or categories of breakfast cereal: wheat-based, rice-based, corn, bran, etc. A description of how different kinds are made and packaged, maybe? It needs a lot more information but this could turn into a really interesting article. --Yodakii 09:19:04, 2005-09-07 (UTC)