Wikipedia:Peer review/Black Friday (Maldives)/archive1

I would like this artilce to be peer reviewed, basically for grammar, spelling and flow. --Oblivious 03:11, 6 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Okei so far I got a copyedit from Wayward, but no feedback from anyone. Still waiting :) --Oblivious 15:56, 7 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

There are a few POV issues that need to be addressed:

"Several key reformists were allegedly blacklisted and subsequently put under surveillance."
"Gayoom's critics are often said to be arrested and tortured in jail, an allegation he continuously denies."
"Women were also beaten with truncheons and they sustained severe injuries."

—Wayward 02:42, August 8, 2005 (UTC)

Must these lines be removed or re-written in diffrent way? suggestions? --Oblivious 10:12, 8 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]