Wikipedia:Peer review/Australia at the Winter Olympics/archive2

Australia at the Winter Olympics edit

Previous peer review and failed FAC both cited comprehensiveness as concerns. I'd be interested in comments on whether there is anything else the article should cover. Thanks, Andjam 11:51, 6 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Actually it looks quite extensive; much better than, for example, USSR at the Winter Olympics. A few of the paragraphs are overly long, which can make for tiresome reading. You might want to split them up a bit. Also I'd like to see the two large tables in their own section, possibly with their own brief introduction. Finally, do you plan on an update following the 2006 games? Thanks. — RJH 18:43, 10 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the layout advice. I've got info about the 2006 games, and it's ready to incorporate results as they come along. As it'll be the latest of 16 games Australia has attended, the article as a whole will be stable. Andjam 23:52, 13 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]