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Arthur Frederick Bettinson

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I've listed this article for peer review because… This is the first substantial article I have made. Any general tips and constructive criticism would be welcome to improve this article as much as possible. Thanks, Okeeffemarc (talk) 19:47, 19 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Try to avoid one-sentence paragraphs
You might consider asking the Guild to take a look through the article
Quotations shouldn't be italicized as a rule. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:17, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]