Wikipedia:Peer review/Appalachian School of Law/archive1

Appalachian School of Law

I would love some advice on how to improve this article and take this on the path to a featured status. I would like to get feedback on the whole article, but on the following sections in particular:

History

Academic Program

Student Life

Should I add any other sections? One section you might notice missing would be notable alumni. As this school will graduate its eighth class this May, I feel that it is too soon to start that section. Plus, I don't know of any prominent alumni. Feedback on the article is greatly appreciated. Chrisfortier 13:50, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

Comments from Susanlesch

This article is very well written and presented. A pleasure to read. And it deserves a higher rating. Two things might help it along and one of those is easy -- captialize only the first word in headings, for example, "The Beginning" becomes "The beginnning." Most important though, the article is perfectly cited in some parts but other parts are noticeably missing any inline citations. Or did I miss the pattern? Citations for everything will be required to reach GA and FA. Is there a way to cite every part of the article? Either an overall reference work to which all the uncited paras refer, or individual citations per sentence or paragraph would do the trick. By the way, the formatting of citations that are there seems to be very well done. I am not an expert but I think that once those refs are in place the article might pass GA as written. -Susanlesch 02:46, 3 April 2007 (UTC)

Thanks from Chrisfortier

Thank you very much for the feedback Susanlesch! I will work on what you suggested, strengthening the citations and formatting the titles. I appreciate your help. Chrisfortier 14:33, 4 April 2007 (UTC)