Anna F. edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to make this article a good article, and I would appreciate your feedback on what you think would be good steps for this article to get that status.
Thanks, Lucky102 (talk) 22:38, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
Comments from Hmlarson
- in lead/intro
- Can you add that she won the "Pop" category at the Amadeus Austrian Music Awards 2009?
- 2009–2011
- Change published to "released"
- under 2001–-present section
- add reference for first sentence. Can this sentence be expounded upon so it's not a 1-sentence paragraph? Perhaps describing a little more about the role, film, or reception of her performance?
- add "Her second studio album" (or similar) before "King in the Mirror was released in ... Anything you can add about this album to flesh out a little?
That's it for now. I'll take another look later + run a few checks. Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you. Hmlarson (talk) 00:55, 10 August 2017 (UTC)