Wikipedia:Peer review/Amitabh Bachchan/archive1

Amitabh Bachchan edit

I have made a lot of contributions to this page, and it looks pretty good. It went from a fawning fan fluff piece to a bit more of an encyclopedic entry.

There is small additional work that needs to be done (character names for the filmography will need to be imported from imdb), but we need input on what else might need to be done. --Yoasif 20:43, 16 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  1. You would need a free image of Amitabh
  2. Lead should be ~250-300 words
  3. Remove bold text
  4. A paragraph should have 8-10 sentences
  5. The filmography table looks tacky
  6. Model the article in chronological order of his life
  7. Heavy Copyedit needed
  8. Early life stuff
  9. Estrangement with his brother Ajitabh
  10. Days in Calcutta seem to be absent
  11. Global recognition is absent
  12. Earnings?

=Nichalp «Talk»= 09:36, 24 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]