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Akeelah and the Bee edit

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate it to FA some time in the future. As I'm not a native, however, I feel my prose flow is not always the best and as much as clearer as it could be. I've already requested a copyedit on the Guild of Copy Editors and it was done by Tezero in July–August 2014. After in November 2014 a GA review was done by SNUGGUMS and his suggestions helped me to improve it again. Nonetheless, I've added much more content since then and tried to copyedit it by myself. However, as I said, I'm not too confident on my writing skills. So my main request would be a scrutiny on the prose but of course every commentary on other aspects of the article is welcome.

Thanks, Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:23, 19 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]