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2010–11 NK Maribor season edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because… it is completed and is planned to become a GA or FA if it meets all the criteria. The article sums up the past season of the Slovenian football club NK Maribor, current GA nominee. This is the first peer review of this article.

Thanks, Ratipok (talk) 01:05, 8 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Oldelpaso

My first impression is that to get to GA the article requires a lot more prose. At present the article is dominated by tables of statistics without anything to put them into context. Try looking at some existing football season GAs, for example 2009–10 Plymouth Argyle F.C. season.
Its not clear why the teams are bolded in the list of results, though I see some other articles of this type also do it.
The lead should be longer than a couple of lines, see WP:LEAD.
Somewhere or other the positions should be either wikilinked or put in a key, so that the reader can find out the meaning of FW, GK etc.
There's inconsistency in the type of English used. In some places it appears to be American English (e.g. The score after regulation), in other places the British discretionary plural is used. A couple of times usage varies in the same sentence: The team played its opening match of the seasons in a Supercup final on 9 July, 2010, when they lost against Koper
How did the club qualify for the Europa League?

Hope this helps. Oldelpaso (talk) 13:17, 12 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]